azalea
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Post by azalea on Sept 14, 2007 8:51:42 GMT -5
XD Unlike Silf Tyde isn't very concerned with electricity >_> Kai probably smacked him and dragged him out of the rain.
Silf's a living lightning pole XD
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Post by Modesty on Nov 4, 2007 11:22:02 GMT -5
Currently, Round 13 will use the script posted in this forum. We know the ending for Round 13, so let's try and come up with some ideas for round 14. As a reminder the completed pages so far are here
So these pages end with: 1) Angelo assigning Jaes to call kai at 9 pm to pick up some charts and a box. 2) Marron refusing to help evil-bad and possibly sealing her own fate. 3) The search group finding the lab with the lights on. to avoid a storm. 4) Silf talking to Gelo and Jaes
The only thing I'm confused about is time of day. :3 When Silf and Terran finish fighting the Golem it's evening or so (thus Ms Silf says "Good Night") Supposedly it's evening when the girls decide to go out searching. (Label: Girl's Night) We can assume it's evening by the time Angelo and Jaes go out for Chinese. (Late Dinner). But it is not quite 9 pm. I only bring this up because it's important to keep track of WHEN and WHERE characters are in the story so readers are not too confused.
Shall we assume it's evening then? Silf finishes with the Golem with Terran 6:30 pm Angelo and Jaes meet Silf on their way to dinner 7:00 pm Lucius comes home after "work" around 7:00 pm The group starts looking for Marron at 7:05 pm. XD Marron has been at the Lab since 6:30 pm Marron wakes up to talk to Terran at about 7:15 pm It starts to rain at about 8:15 (the group reportedly stopped to eat while searching or if it's anything like MY campus it take 30 minutes to get from point A to point B no matter how close you think it is). Jaes can call Kai and Tyde early 8:30 pm Kai and Tyde can arrive at Lab 5 at 9:00 pm.
That's the time table. ----------------------------------------------- Now as to where the next pages should go we can. a) Continue where the last pages left off in Lab 5 at 8:15 pm b) Something else...my brain just died. Err...something with the evil-bads perhaps. (Kero, DD and Sable)
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Azaeziel
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Post by Azaeziel on Nov 5, 2007 17:19:08 GMT -5
Just so you know, I have almost finished the first page of the first half of the script, and I made a slight change to it. I know I forgot to put Jaes's arm band on his arm in the pages I drew last time, so I included him tying it on his arm as his reason for going back to the room (even though he doesn't say anything, it's just a shot of him tying it on). Just so you know for future referance, he now has his slave-tattoo thing covered with his red arm band. Also, I have take the two pages of script and am going to make three pages out of it. I don't like a cluttered page or one with tiny talking heads and stuff, and If I tried to draw it as scripted I would wind up not liking what I did, so, I will have 3 pages for you soon. (I assume it's ok to throw in whatever/whomever I want as background people who may or may not ever re-appear as non-speaking walk-on background roles and such? Heheheh... Ummmm... If you don't notice, then never mind.) ;D Waxen is going to try and get these pages colored also, and as soon as we finish each page we will post it in the completed pages thread so that they are available asap. I won't wait till they are all done to post as a set, I'll just get them up as soon as they are ready for you. --------------------------------------- As far as script goes, Hmmm... Maybe the search group gets in trouble, gets rescued by Kai and Tyde (as Jaes calls them to go get Angelo's chart and box) and then they find Something to incriminate Sgt. Terran in the kidnapping of Marron, but then find Sgt. Terran unconcious (as the possessing spirit has moved on to it's next victim) and realize the incriminating evidence was set up by someone. (Perhaps causeing Kai and Tyde to suspect Jaes again or something?) Then perhaps, have Jaes find Marron hurt, unconcious, and dying and the group finds him carrying Marron back to the campus for help. Leave it there for the next artist to figure out what happens, maybe?
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Azaeziel
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Post by Azaeziel on Nov 6, 2007 12:08:23 GMT -5
Sorry to DP but just wanted you to know, page 1 is drawn, Waxen is inking and coloring it today (or tonight, depending) and it should be ready for post by Thursday or Friday. Working on page 2 now. That is all.
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Post by Modesty on Nov 6, 2007 12:33:57 GMT -5
;D There are no words to describe your awesomeness. XD Thanks so much Az. Yes...you can put in any characters you want as BG characters. If they're yours, I can credit them in the comments.
I was kind of thinking of going along those lines of the group getting into a bind and Kai and Tyde coming to the rescue. It would make most sense to pull the threads together and start on the lab page instead of jumping elsewhere.
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Azaeziel
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Post by Azaeziel on Nov 6, 2007 19:30:33 GMT -5
ok, so the next update goes like this:
Page two of the first half of the script is drawn and I pass it to Waxen tonight for ink and color. I'm now starting on the line art/pencil whipping of page three (last page) of the first half of the round 13 script. I should have it done tomorrow so Waxen can work her magic on it as well.
(Figuring out how to draw an apathetic character who didn't look like he was just falling asleep was rather funny, but I think I got it. Still a lot of dialog on the page, but Waxen might be able to make it look nicer then my hand written scribble does.)
Thus ends this update, and hopefully the next one will tell you more good news.
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Post by Modesty on Nov 20, 2007 14:29:32 GMT -5
I'm going to start planning a script for Round 14 which will officially happen during the secret santa round.
I'm going to attempt to set up our evil-bad's motive and abilities somehow as well as what we discussed here. Um I'll post more in writing and dialog soon.
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Post by Modesty on Dec 16, 2007 14:36:02 GMT -5
Okay, I've written the script for the next bit. It's on my other computer at the moment, so I'll post it here ASAHP. You can suggest changes in dialogue or events. The way I have it set up, I'll be drawing about 5 pages.
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Post by James StarRunner on Dec 18, 2007 4:51:31 GMT -5
Great stuff Mod! I think everyone is in character there. Joy might be wanting to bring her staff with her everywhere she goes now if these dangers keep popping up. XD
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Post by Modesty on Dec 18, 2007 15:16:06 GMT -5
Thanks James and Az. I'll be finishing the pencils for all 5 pages today. (Nothing much to do this week at home. XD)
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Post by Modesty on Jan 22, 2008 11:29:44 GMT -5
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azalea
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Post by azalea on Jan 22, 2008 12:26:01 GMT -5
XD Tyde has a crush? Or is he just interested in her skills to the effect of : ooooo~ pwetty magics!
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Post by shiroikami on Jan 22, 2008 14:33:31 GMT -5
Haha... hid the box in a maze... ^_^
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Post by James StarRunner on Jan 22, 2008 16:42:06 GMT -5
Ohhhhh! That's one a'maze'ing complex! *is shot for the pun* Is bb doing more pages this round?
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Azaeziel
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Post by Azaeziel on Jan 22, 2008 18:17:19 GMT -5
I thought I read earlier that she was gonna do like 10 pages or somesuch, cause she had a great idea for moving the plot along. I'm hoping these are just the first three as a sneek peek. (I'm just curious what a giant maze is doing in Lab 5... Though I suppose that's as good a place for it as any...) heheh
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