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Post by shiroikami on Jan 22, 2008 22:57:41 GMT -5
Lab 5... where anything can happen... and often does.
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Post by Modesty on Feb 15, 2008 13:17:58 GMT -5
:3 bb gave us some juicy story elements to work with! We now have Jaes possessed by Tai. And a new arrival...Pookie. ;D And Lucius is going to drown in quicksand. Won't someone save me? Wesley will come. Shoot...I don't care just someone get me out of here! I've got a wife and three kids and a fourth on the way.
EDIT: I finished coloring. :3 Do not.
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Post by Azaeziel on Feb 15, 2008 15:15:10 GMT -5
Awesome Pages! (One thing though, and it's the same thing I forgot and had to go back for, Jaes's armband! We made such a point of it being there earlier when I forgot it that for him not to have it now would make it look like it wasn't Jaes being possesed but some other cat-person anielf.) Can't wait to see these colored and posted! Edit----------------------------------------------------- The color looks awesome, but still, we are missing Jaes's armband!
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Post by Modesty on Feb 15, 2008 18:02:38 GMT -5
Just posting the explanation to the pages bb sent me. Some things I would suggest: a) Angelo and kai don't necessarily have to be mind-controlled. They're very gullible so there's no need. Instead, my idea would be that Sable learned of the successful studies Angelo conducted on Kai and his telekenesis. For a reward, Sable allows Angelo and Kai to work on reanimating Pookey. (I reward work with MORE WORK. XD) Angelo is told that Pookey is important to finding the "missing" headmaster and this would help the school's financial crisis. Once the project was finished, Angelo sent Kai to deliver Pookey to Sable. Daixx now favors Sable over Kero. b) Marron was Kero's tool. While "erasing" Marron's memory she discovered the ability. She had been trying to convince Daixx to use the girl to destroy Tai. However, they are still unsure how she uses her power. Kero may skulk about this a bit. Also note that Marron is one of the only ones who can NOT be possessed. Doing so would harm the demon, but NOT kill them. c) It would be nice if someone decided to help Lucius. :3 pweez? We should further discuss the possession/mind-control business before it becomes a cliche fall-back. XD Sooo...I think we'll be going back to PLOT DISCUSSION for more. :3
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Post by azalea on Feb 16, 2008 0:27:53 GMT -5
Silf's internal mind: What in the Muted siren gales is going on! I will not tolerate this invasiveness upon my person! Testaments of the tides and wailing wraiths when my body is my own I will shred you to pieces with your own screaming breath, and if any of the students have been harmed I will make it slow and chokingly painful!
Azzy: I'm thinking Silf is not going to be fun when she figures out she's possessed/ was possessed >_>
If Kai and Tyde are following Jaes wouldn't they have maybe noticed Lucius descent off the cliff?
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Post by Modesty on Feb 16, 2008 13:02:17 GMT -5
Ohh yeeeeahhhh... Well...just goes to show how much everyone hates him. XD Gawd, you are so mean. Perhaps we can have one of them tail Jaes who now has Marron prisoner and the other try to help Lucius. :3 OR they fell behind while tailing Jaes and didn't show up until after the fact and only saw him grab Marron. Nice catch on my plot hole. ;D
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Post by James StarRunner on Feb 17, 2008 8:53:50 GMT -5
Edit----------------------------------------------------- The color looks awesome, but still, we are missing Jaes's armband! And the scar on his torso, but that's actually less minor. Ya, I did kinda make a big fuss over that armband... I intend to make the slave brand on his arm (which should be revealed later) a later plot device. No biggie for forgetting though... I even occasionally forget to draw their tails.
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Post by Modesty on Mar 19, 2008 15:43:36 GMT -5
Now would be a good time to start writing comic scripts. Please post some of your suggestions here.
The most recent pages are included above. Those should help.
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Post by azalea on Mar 19, 2008 16:18:16 GMT -5
I think it'd be a good idea to have Kai and Tyde not leave Lucius to the quicksand >_> As outsiders (not in the auditorium) they might be able to go back get Angelo possibly anyone else available and head off on a rescue mission or we can split them with Tyde and Lucius or Kai and Lucius or Kai and Tyde going to see what they can do in the auditorium and the other one going to get reinforcements. ...we could have one of them announce over the PA that (insert famous boyband) is performing in the auditorium and let the fangirls do all the work >_> ...Tyde's a reverse healer (He hates it) but i wonder what that would do to pooky ? we could have the outside gang venture into the ventilation system, I would think Tyde's bulk and Angelo's wings would get them stuck though. Silf has a strong aversion to killing students, I could see her fighting against possession causing a malfunction with her cybernetics, or someone sends a shock her way, though very few know about her cybernetics so i'm not sure.
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Post by Modesty on Mar 19, 2008 20:32:52 GMT -5
Hey...I like that idea with Tyde's reverse healing against pookey (but please don't kill him...he's just so cute. )
Joy and Miria should be looking for Lucius with Angelo anyway.
So some sort of group dynamic should be possible and plans. Oh...and I suppose we could save Lucius.
Luckily it's not very quick quick-sand and I'm pretty tall.
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Post by azalea on Mar 20, 2008 11:25:11 GMT -5
the only problem with Tyde using his reverse healing is that he needs to get close enough to use it without being mind-controlled. ; Tyde mind-controlled is actually a rather scary thought. So maybe he knocks out Pookie but Daixx or someone mind-controls him or flings him across the room? Tyde's the rag-doll feel free to throw him around XD, You can even dislocate one of his shoulders or something...and have Angelo ever so kindly 're-locate' it. Tyde: At least you didn't suggest dislocating both my shoulders! That really hurt last time you know. Azzy: *shakes head and sighs* Miria's good with water maybe she can fiddle with the sprinkler systems? A) this places her and Tyde in an environment filled with their element b)causes confusion, maybe someone can 'slip' on a puddle c)water conducts electricity!
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Post by Modesty on Mar 20, 2008 12:49:38 GMT -5
Or Kai's telekinesis could set off sprinklers. (I don't know why I just love the Kai-Tyde team but I do. XD)
I was also just noticing Daixx's last line there. He says 'his minions were on their way to destroy Tai's true body'. Who are those minions? What will Tai's counter be?
I really don't like Marron doing the damsel in distress thing. This might be a chance for her to unleash her powers. I'm going to assume she is loose and able to move about freely. She could free Ms. Silf and Afanen from mind control. She's close enough to touch them. OR she could force Tai's spirit to return to his original body. She's close enough to him too. Then Daixx would really be pissed.
Then Kai could set off the sprinkler system. Then Tyde can capture Pookey and hurt him.
We'd also need a scene of Kai explaining more of what Pookey is and what he and Angelo did to it and then Tyde can get the idea to undo what Angelo had done.
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Post by azalea on Mar 20, 2008 16:07:19 GMT -5
Tyde won't enjoy hurting Pookie either T_T it'll remind him of his biggest failing
as revenge one of the girls/guys who wasn't aware of why pookie would need to be injured is welcome to leave a few lumps on Tyde's head. XD
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Post by Modesty on Mar 21, 2008 11:23:35 GMT -5
;D Poor Tyde. He's so lovable! Who would want to hurt him? XD
Anyway, I think we have a lot of ideas here that we can get a sample script on.
I might do some writing this weekend or maybe even tonight.
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Post by Modesty on Apr 1, 2008 12:39:16 GMT -5
I wrote some sample scripts for future comics. Please discuss and suggest changes. I'm not completely happy with what I wrote. I used some of the suggested situations. I'm particularly unhappy with my first section of the script. I've broken it up into a couple of posts cuz I wrote several scenes.
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