Azaeziel
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Purple, because ice cream has no bones.
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Post by Azaeziel on Aug 25, 2008 13:12:48 GMT -5
I busted a gut when I read the first part with Kiro and Diaxx and the nacho requirement. Athena came into the room and had to read it too, just based on my laughter. Beyond that, it looks ok to me. I can't think of anything more to add to it.
(Is the cover again going to be one of those contests where everyone who wants to can send in an idea and the one you like the most gets chosen as the new chapter cover?)
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Post by Modesty on Aug 25, 2008 21:35:12 GMT -5
Well...there will only be one or two entries so I say first come first serve. XD I won't be able to make a cover at the moment. Gotta get my Thesis proposal in ASAP. Yes...nachos.
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azalea
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Flowery doom~
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Post by azalea on Sept 1, 2008 13:31:31 GMT -5
Silf and Tyde's parts look sweet! XD Evil-ish Tyde~! and it's Tydaris >_> Tyde knows Marron is pregnant and how Pookie amplifies her powers... so wouldn't Tai learn to if he possessed tyde?
last thought of Tyde XD *laughs*
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Post by Modesty on Sept 2, 2008 9:43:10 GMT -5
Well, see yes that's all true which is why Tyde isn't going to be possessed right away. He's going to be a lackey for awhile until Tai trusts him enough to borrow his body. (I was about to type "get inside him" but thought better of it...oops too late. XD) Also Tai doesn't want to "waste" a possession if he can learn that information from Tyde in other ways. It'd probably be best for Tai to possess Tyde during a climatic clash. :3
On that same train of thought, Tai already knows Pookey's affect on demons. He knows Marrons power. A couple of encounters with them will teach him that first fact. It's only a matter of time before the pregnancy becomes apparent.
Errr...right I'll fix the spelling of his name too. XD
Thanks for the feedback.
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Post by Modesty on Aug 2, 2009 12:50:44 GMT -5
So we have returned to the brainstorm process for the next bit of script! Dreaming up what could happen next is my favorite part. Just so we are all on the same page. Here is what happened so far: - our good guys meet in the underground safehouse - They learn about demon powers and who is "safe" from demons - Tyde decides to be a double agent and goes to work for Tai. What we know about Tai: He has no legs and only one arm. XD He does NOT trust Tyde yet. He has not admitted that his reason for returning was to take back the IMA, perhaps there is another reason. Also because of this thread, we have decided which characters are going to "fade" and which are going to die. SPOILER: We are planning for Tyde to die. (And no pheonix downs!) But that probably won't happen in this part of the script. Things we could focus on: 1) The reaction of seeing Tyde missing. Ms Silf/Kai will figure out what he did. Just by deduction, thus they choose not to search for him nor to trust him if they cross paths. (1 page) 2) The characters deciding and acting on a plan of action. 3) Trying to go back to class. (Perhaps having some characters concerned how this demon thing affects their graduation). 4) Time passing where things seem normal...except no Tyde, no Kai, and no Miria. (Focus has been turned off of these characters.) 5) Sylphi getting better. These are just suggestions. I'd like for there to be something more exciting and actiony happening soon. We spent a lot of time in down time mode. :/
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azalea
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Post by azalea on Aug 2, 2009 16:42:51 GMT -5
hmmm, Silf will be back to teaching classes and counseling students and such, things will be quiet but I think Silf will do her best to get some info...maybe take a look at the old student records, sit down and read through old files which will no doubt be a time consuming process but may give the gang a lead.
maybe show a shot of school 'transfer' forms or 'leave of absence' forms for some of the faded out characters?
I'd like to see the every day lives of the cast ...maybe near the end/middle they all sit down to eat and suddenly (either literally or figuratively) someones knocked in the back of the head with an idea?
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Post by Modesty on Aug 7, 2009 16:16:39 GMT -5
Coming back to this. I definitely think the every-day lives of the students should be shown at this time. So the next chunk of script should flow like this:
-Back in the underground bunker, we discover Tyde is gone and deduce what he has done. (2-3 pages) -Have some time passage perhaps two weeks where things get normal. (just a label 2 weeks later). We'll focus on the cast doing their routine. -Each of the "branches" of our cast could be doing their own thing to gather info. Joy is probably stuck in a library. Sylphie would have recovered. Ms Silf goes through files. With some discussion here and there. -Cut to Tai and Tyde with Finn or maybe Tyde and Finn on a co-op mission of sorts. Finn probably won't like Tyde. We'll say shadow number two had a run in with one of Kero's golems.
That's as far as I've thought.
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azalea
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Post by azalea on Aug 8, 2009 23:12:40 GMT -5
Finn doesn't like Tyde's 3 AM wake-up call and exercise routine >_>
maybe Tyde has to 'prove' himself and pull a bad guy move? This might put him face to face with some of the cast creating an awkward situation. He tries to give them a clue without stepping out of the 'bad guy' character or being obvious to Tai or Finn. " Ms. Silf, always so nosy, but you must have some real good secrets in your pathetic 122 years eh? And Angelo,so good, so nice, I bet you burn down holy ground. " - 122 years is not silf's age, it's a hint to the date of an event, - burn down holy ground- a hint to location maybe an old church or shrine that burned down?
just brain storming @_@
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Post by Modesty on Sept 23, 2009 13:05:14 GMT -5
Bumping for activity. We'll need to get a script down if we're to make new comic pages.
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azalea
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Flowery doom~
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Post by azalea on Sept 23, 2009 16:47:46 GMT -5
first a scene maybe 1-3 pages establishing characters waking up, finding Tyde gone,and assuming he's gone through with his plan to 'infiltrate' the other side.
Then maybe a few pages of each character in class, at school with a narrator over top.
The narrator explain show everyone id doing, or what they're doing...this may be a good point to say this character or that character left for some sort of internship? This way the character roster is toned down, but we can still bring the characters back at some point.
"Life went by normally, with no more info to work from everyone drifted into their own separate lives. Everything seems back to normal..."
maybe shot of Tyde's empty bedroom, as well as empty offices for the school heads?
"of course theres always a storm following the calm. "
and the group thats left is gathered, maybe eating lunch in the cafeteria, mulling over things?
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Post by Modesty on Sept 25, 2009 9:26:30 GMT -5
that's a good outline for the next set. Let's work with that. Are you willing to write up a script or should I?
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Post by Modesty on Oct 15, 2009 19:14:37 GMT -5
Sorry I haven't been posting much. Work you know. So is anyone up for writing this script?
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Post by bluebug on Nov 17, 2009 23:26:10 GMT -5
Yo. If you're still looking for a script writer, I can probably crack my knuckles at it this weekend. (I have no idea why I used that expression and if it actually exists.)
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Azaeziel
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Purple, because ice cream has no bones.
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Post by Azaeziel on Nov 18, 2009 0:02:27 GMT -5
Hi. Umm... Long time, no see? Sorry I've been gone. It doesn't really matter why I guess, but, umm... Can I do some filler art and rejoin?
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Post by bluebug on Nov 18, 2009 22:11:20 GMT -5
Didn't you get married? Weddings tend to suck up a lot of time and energy - in a good way of course XD Anyway, you're not the only one who pulled a disappearing act ... KM pulled one too, the bad boy. KM: And whose fault was that?? Er ... Glad you're back! Hope to see more of Karen the Marilith soon!!
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