NN Current Script

[Modesty]

I've rewritten the first half of the gym scene. I'll post the second half on Monday.

Scene: In the Gym Part 1
Objective: Daixx reveals his ultimate goal, Marron begins to trigger chaos
Characters: Daixx, Tai(Jaes), Marron (Minors: Afanen, Silf)

*Jaes held back by Afanen and Silf. He should be scowling.Silf should look like she's having

an internal struggle or in pain*
Daixx (off-panel): You don't have a witty comeback for me, big bro? You must have a few last words before you life ends.

*Daixx tickles Pookey's ear*
D: The only problem I'll have once I have your powers is what I'm going to do with them.

*Daixx grins as if he knew all along what he wanted.*
D: Oh yes. I think I know what I'll do. I will set myself free from this curse and use these two schools to spread my influence. Just like you were planning to do.

*Daixx looks a bit disgusted and surprised. Kind of a sneer with one eyebrow raised. (or something.)*
Marron (off Panel): Sounds great...then what will you do?

*Marron standing just in front of a captive Jaes. Her arms folded over her chest. Annoyed expression.*
M: Don't mind me. I'm just taking notes while you announce your evil plan to take over the world.

*Daixx holds Pookey close to Marron's face. He looks disgruntled. arron continues to be pissed.*
D: Pookey has no affect on you? How unfortunate for you. Can't have a plucky thing like you out and about. I'd hate to have to kill someone with your skills. Perhaps we could have some sort of arrangement for you.
M: I don't like dealing with demons.

*Daixx holds a long fingernail under Marron's chin. She continues to try to look defiant.*
D: Oh come now. We're not all that bad. I would keep you very close at hand. By my side even. YOu can help me in my quest to stop other powers against me. Less demons in the world, works for you doesn't it?
M: I'm not a weapon. I will help neither of you!

*Marron presses her palm on Jaes' chest. Her eyes are glowing (green if in color)*
M: Tai'kae Alpha, return to your original vessel!

*The spirit departs from Jaes. Perhaps Tai's ghosty form flying off while Jaes faints*

*Daixx seizes Marron by the strap on her dress. His eyes glowing and powerlines showing. Marron looks a bit startled.*
D: Oh ho ho, wrong choice sister. You are going to regret that.
//End the Scene

[Modesty]

(Here's the rest of the script I promised. )

Scene: In the Gym Part 2
Objective: Disable Pookey, Attempt to capture Daixx, Daixx escapes
Characters: Daixx, Tyde, Kai, Silf. (Minor: Kero, Pookey)

*Tyde and Kai are looking out into the crowds. They see Marron getting seized.*
Kai: crap! This is nuts! Let's get out of here.
Tyde: No wait. We can't let him just get away with this. We should do something.

*Kai looks panicked and angry*
Kai: Do something? Like what? He's controlling a mob of hundreds. You think you can face that many, because I sure as hell can't.

*Tyde looks up. And smirks*
Tyde: We can do it. That thing on his arm gives him power. We just need to knock it out. And to do that we just need a distraction and I need water. So can you get the sprinkler system going?

*Daixx is dragging a struggling Marron along. He covers his head as water is coming down.*
D: What's going on around here? KERO! Sable!

*Daixx gets wrapped in water, Pookey is wrapped in a black light and starts regaining old wounds.*
D: Pookey! NO!

*Wet Daixx with predatory eyes snarls.*
D: Where are you? You can't hide from me.

*Daixx met with the edge of Silf's big sword*
Silf: You won't be harming any more of my students, demon.

*Kero knocks Silf back and encases a wet Daixx inside her barrier*
Kero: You won't lay a hand on Master Daixx, sea slime.
*They disappear*

*Silf is surrounded by unconscious students. Except for Tyde and Kai who stand alone.*
Silf: Great work you two. We weren't able to stop him, but at least I have some answers. We need to find a safe haven.

*Afanen looking exhausted kneels next to Marron who is cradling Pookey and healing him slightly.*
A: Are you all right Marron?
M: Don't worry about me. I'm just a little shaken.

*Pookey rubs his head under Marron's chin. Marron for now ignores him and looks desperate*
M: I need to save Lucius now.
A: No, you must stay with Silf and the others. You should not strain yourself in your condition!

*Afanen stands above her gripping her staff. Marron looks up with Pookey nestled against her*
A: I will fetch your husband and bring him to the safe house. I promise I won't be long.
M: Afanen, thank you! Please, he's stuck in the sand pits!

*Marron cradling sleeping Pookey stands with Silf and Tyde who is carrying Jaes*
Silf: Someone will come soon to clean up this mess.

*Return of the Yellow Suited janitors.*
Modesty: Oh...crap.
bb: And today was suppose to be our day off!!
//End Scene


Scene: At the Cliffs
Objective: Wind down the Gym Scene, Gather the rest of the cast into one place, end the chapter.
Characters: Angelo, Lucius, Miria, Joy, Afanen. (Minor: Marron, Silf)

*Miria looks outraged and disbeleiving.*
Miria: You revived a lesser demon? How? Why?

*Angelo looks guilted, rubs the back of his head or something*
A: It was for a scholarship. I don't really have a family supporting me and I didn't get any summer internships. It's how I met Kai in the first place. He helped me for a scholarship too.

*flashback of Angelo and Kai looking surprised and disgusted into the box*
A: To be fair...it didn't look anything like a lesser demon when we first started.

*Kai and Angelo in surgery masks bent over a table. You can't see what's on the table*
A: We spent all summer putting it back together because despite its mangled form, it was still alive, poor thing. Half way through I realized what it was, but I couldn't stand to see it in such pain. Call me a softie.

*A happy Pookey sits on the table with some bandages and stitches.*
A: It seemed perfectly harmless. I had often asked the purpose of the project and the only answer we got was "to prove the superiority of OTI." Or "It was an excellent energy source."

*box with the red stripe in a spotlight*
A: We were ordered to strict confidentiality about the project. I was to keep it under tight security until Sable claimed he wanted to show the Director of the IMA.

*Angelo grins sheepishly and blushes. Joy crosses her arms and looks stern.*
A: It was terribly naive of me. Sort of embarrassing.
Joy: Well, it's done now. What are we going to do now is more important.

Joy looks up at the moon.
Joy: We've spent too long out here anyway. Slyphie's still at Angelo's place and we can't do anything for anyone else. Let's go back.

*Lucius crouches his hands glow with energy. Miria tenses too. Both looking off panel*
L: Who's there? Come out!

*Afanen lands near Joy*
Af: You're alive. Good. Marron will be relieved. And I am happy to find you all conveniently in one spot.
Joy: Professor, Dok. What's going on?

*Afanen looks grave*
Af: There is little time to explain. I am gathering whoever I can to safe haven. We have blood-brother demons rivaling on the island.
Joy (off panel): Where are we going?

*Afanen's arm points into the woods.*
Af: Ms. Silf is gathering students into an underground santuary. Joy, you should be able to read the trail I left.

*Angelo stands with clenched fists. Afanen looks a bit weary*
Ag: Wait. Sylphie and Terran are still at my place.
Af: Fine...I'll fetch them too. You stay with the others.

*The group runs through the woods*
Lucius: Hm...not bad for the first two days of school. I don't think we'll have class for awhile.
Joy: I know...it's terrible.
//end scene

[Azaeziel]

Ok, so I am now storyboarding/pencil whipping part ONE of this script. heheh... I thought the second half was already done but wasn't sure and got confuzeled a bit there. Ok, I'm on track now. Hope to have something for you soon.

[Modesty]

Awesome. Thanks so much. I look forward to them. I dance with glee at updating NN pages.

[James StarRunner]

Only Joy would be upset about missing school.

[Modesty]

How are the pages coming Az?
I'm using our Halloween pictures as filler for now.

[Azaeziel]

Sorry. I'll have 'em ready soon. As I said before, Athena is working on other stuff (like the acrylics and stuff) and won't be coloring them, so I've been trying to do it myself, but not doing very well and I haven't been happy with any of it, so I think I'll just be doing black and white pages this time round. Hope that's ok. They'll be ready soon, I promise!

[Modesty]

Just a note, I've edited the cliff scene...most of the information was extraneous so I cut it out. (I slashed them!) That'll make the scene shorter and hopefully easier to manage. Plus it ends the chapter nicely.