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Jun 20, 2008 13:56:32 GMT -5
Post by Modesty on Jun 20, 2008 13:56:32 GMT -5
I've rewritten the first half of the gym scene. I'll post the second half on Monday.
Scene: In the Gym Part 1
Objective: Daixx reveals his ultimate goal, Marron begins to trigger chaos
Characters: Daixx, Tai(Jaes), Marron (Minors: Afanen, Silf)
*Jaes held back by Afanen and Silf. He should be scowling.Silf should look like she's having
an internal struggle or in pain*
Daixx (off-panel): You don't have a witty comeback for me, big bro? You must have a few last words before you life ends.
*Daixx tickles Pookey's ear*
D: The only problem I'll have once I have your powers is what I'm going to do with them.
*Daixx grins as if he knew all along what he wanted.*
D: Oh yes. I think I know what I'll do. I will set myself free from this curse and use these two schools to spread my influence. Just like you were planning to do.
*Daixx looks a bit disgusted and surprised. Kind of a sneer with one eyebrow raised. (or something.)*
Marron (off Panel): Sounds great...then what will you do?
*Marron standing just in front of a captive Jaes. Her arms folded over her chest. Annoyed expression.*
M: Don't mind me. I'm just taking notes while you announce your evil plan to take over the world.
*Daixx holds Pookey close to Marron's face. He looks disgruntled. arron continues to be pissed.*
D: Pookey has no affect on you? How unfortunate for you. Can't have a plucky thing like you out and about. I'd hate to have to kill someone with your skills. Perhaps we could have some sort of arrangement for you.
M: I don't like dealing with demons.
*Daixx holds a long fingernail under Marron's chin. She continues to try to look defiant.*
D: Oh come now. We're not all that bad. I would keep you very close at hand. By my side even. YOu can help me in my quest to stop other powers against me. Less demons in the world, works for you doesn't it?
M: I'm not a weapon. I will help neither of you!
*Marron presses her palm on Jaes' chest. Her eyes are glowing (green if in color)*
M: Tai'kae Alpha, return to your original vessel!
*The spirit departs from Jaes. Perhaps Tai's ghosty form flying off while Jaes faints*
*Daixx seizes Marron by the strap on her dress. His eyes glowing and powerlines showing. Marron looks a bit startled.*
D: Oh ho ho, wrong choice sister. You are going to regret that.
//End the Scene
Objective: Daixx reveals his ultimate goal, Marron begins to trigger chaos
Characters: Daixx, Tai(Jaes), Marron (Minors: Afanen, Silf)
*Jaes held back by Afanen and Silf. He should be scowling.Silf should look like she's having
an internal struggle or in pain*
Daixx (off-panel): You don't have a witty comeback for me, big bro? You must have a few last words before you life ends.
*Daixx tickles Pookey's ear*
D: The only problem I'll have once I have your powers is what I'm going to do with them.
*Daixx grins as if he knew all along what he wanted.*
D: Oh yes. I think I know what I'll do. I will set myself free from this curse and use these two schools to spread my influence. Just like you were planning to do.
*Daixx looks a bit disgusted and surprised. Kind of a sneer with one eyebrow raised. (or something.)*
Marron (off Panel): Sounds great...then what will you do?
*Marron standing just in front of a captive Jaes. Her arms folded over her chest. Annoyed expression.*
M: Don't mind me. I'm just taking notes while you announce your evil plan to take over the world.
*Daixx holds Pookey close to Marron's face. He looks disgruntled. arron continues to be pissed.*
D: Pookey has no affect on you? How unfortunate for you. Can't have a plucky thing like you out and about. I'd hate to have to kill someone with your skills. Perhaps we could have some sort of arrangement for you.
M: I don't like dealing with demons.
*Daixx holds a long fingernail under Marron's chin. She continues to try to look defiant.*
D: Oh come now. We're not all that bad. I would keep you very close at hand. By my side even. YOu can help me in my quest to stop other powers against me. Less demons in the world, works for you doesn't it?
M: I'm not a weapon. I will help neither of you!
*Marron presses her palm on Jaes' chest. Her eyes are glowing (green if in color)*
M: Tai'kae Alpha, return to your original vessel!
*The spirit departs from Jaes. Perhaps Tai's ghosty form flying off while Jaes faints*
*Daixx seizes Marron by the strap on her dress. His eyes glowing and powerlines showing. Marron looks a bit startled.*
D: Oh ho ho, wrong choice sister. You are going to regret that.
//End the Scene