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Post by Modesty on Sept 11, 2007 13:53:18 GMT -5
^^ Thanks for posting. I've also posted it in the Spoiler Thread. James is suppose to draw page 1 and 2 correct? Sorry...50 things going on at once and I can't keep up. He's still having internet problems I assume. It'll be a problem if page 3 and 4 get done before 1 and 2. Ummm...suggestions? Az is pretty quick with the pencil and I don't know when James will have access to internet again, let alone a scanner to send images with. Also extra notes: The "FIGURE" is that suppose to be Terran possessed by our spy? 2) I say we do something fun and have Lucius NOT save Marron. Personally, I don't like picturing her has the vulnerable, helpless maiden. (But so far that's what she's been set up as. ) Having Angelo or Tyde save Marron or Daixx and then promoting the jealousy sitcom would be more interesting. Because she's pregnant...with Daixx's child. XD (Lucius: Don't start. Hey...if she's tied to a medical bed. ) (Marron: Think it and I f***ing kill you.) (Lucius: Cleansing mind now!)
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Post by shiroikami on Sept 11, 2007 22:18:46 GMT -5
I -think- it was pages 1 and 2, it might have been 1-3 or 4... I forget... and I left my notes on it at home -.-;;;
Yes, the FIGURE is Terran (or someone else) possessed by the spy, and while I set it up for the group to save Marron, it doesn't necessarily need to happen that way. They could be chased out of the Lab by automated defense systems, or told to go back to their dorms by Terran (presuming that's who the FIGURE is... I honestly hadn't thought that far ahead...), and then someone else saves her (or if it's Daixx, then "saves" ^_^). Like I said, I honestly hadn't thought much beyond what I wrote, I just wanted something to happen in that area. *shrugs*
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Post by Azaeziel on Sept 13, 2007 17:15:23 GMT -5
Hey, Ummm... Heheh... Question. I was looking back through the NN pages and I can't find what Marron was wearing when she wandered off. Is it the sun dress she has on in the 'character profiles' thread, or was it something else? I think if I go back far enough I can find what she was wearing earlier, but did she get changed, cause when she's on the couch with the other girls it looks like she is in a pair of jeans like all the others. Just need a bit of direction so I know what she's wearing while on the table (Unless the Voice/figure guy has a horrible sense of humor and changed her clothes while she was helpless and be-spelled.) Thanks.
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Post by Modesty on Sept 23, 2007 22:22:25 GMT -5
I trimmed some of the extra posts in this thread that did not have anything to do with plot discussion. :3 So that explains why some posts are missing. Now back to business. as far as I'm concerned we have pretty much settled on the scripts for round 12/13, but where shall we go with Round 14. Assuming the current pages are in production. (And actually the more pages the better...that gives us buffer space). The script ends on a cliffhanger in Lab 5. I don't know how the scene with Angelo and Jaes actually ends. (That would be helpful btw...let's get those pages soon.) Anyway, the next bit of script can go off on one of the two established pathes: a) Continuing where Angelo/Jaes left off b) Continuing with the hunting party in Lab 5 OR c) Jump start with Ms Silf getting involved with something. :3 Please discuss!
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Post by Azaeziel on Sept 25, 2007 2:14:26 GMT -5
Hihi! my four pages of Shiroi's script are drawn, inked, and Waxen is working on the colors now. They should be ready to be turned in on Friday. I followed the script very closely with only a few changes to them noticing the rain and heading inside. It does end with the four (Lucius, Joy, Sylphi, and Miria) in the front hallway of 'Lab 5' with Joy noticing that it "probably isn't" Marron in the building like Lucius is hoping. (Though it isn't Panel 8, hehehe)
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Post by Modesty on Jan 5, 2008 19:14:56 GMT -5
Okay...as it stands, here's where we are:
a) Tai Alpha has possessed and kidnapped Lucius. He's going to be gone for awhile.
b)The girls have heard a bit about Tai's plan about using Marron against Daixx. Only Joy and Angelo should be familiar with who that is, because they're Hermione and read the history of hogwarts.
c) Kai gets "the box". Sylphi is critically injured...her healing magic should keep her alive. Marron is sick. Her hair is hiding vomit...that's gross...I didn't want to draw it. Terran is out cold and won't remember the possession.
d) They are headed to the clinic.
Character Locations: Angelo - clinic Kai, Tyde, Sylphi, Joy, Marron, Miria, and Terran - clinic Jaes - Angelo's apartment Ms Silf - her apartment (?) Lucius/Tai Alpha - on the island somewhere
>>The plot will probably move into exposition now. Slyphi will be cared for by Angelo. Tyde can help with the other two.
Some things that can be revealed at this point is: a) Marron's knowledge about demons and her powers b) Joy's knowledge about who Daixx is and Tai Alpha. (Because although Angelo would know...he's busy saving Sylphi's life.) c) What's in the box. (It's a nuero-drug that Angelo has been developing for his Ph.D. and gloves...to help with his dry skin. So his hands are as soft as a baby's behind.)
They can then suggest possible actions to take: a) Telling Ms Silf what they know. b) Finding Daixx themselves first. c) Finding Lucius ergo Tai Alpha.
They could easily split up into groups and do all three. Of course, various conflicts could happen to foil these plans. But those will be in later pages I would think.
What do we want to do next?
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Post by azalea on Jan 5, 2008 20:10:11 GMT -5
Silf's probably perched on the top of a building batman-like keeping watch over the students. XD or at her house in her night-robe with a cup of burnt coffee in her hand and a pile of papers to be looked through in front of her. Just produce enough emotional stress and she might go to investigate and find the group?
<_< Tyde trying to wake up Terran could involve water in the face.
I like the idea of splitting the group. Would they split in a logical manner? Like groups even in combat types or would it be split among friends ? Like the girls, the guys and whoever?
Tyde would probably be best to go with the group in most danger of combat, he'd just need to go and pick up his wooden katana perhaps. It just rained so there's no limit really to the volume of water he could use.
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Post by Modesty on Jan 5, 2008 21:53:58 GMT -5
Well, why just volunteer our characters to do what we want them to do? (except for inactive members. :3)
Tyde would be a good one to look for Lucius. Angelo will be stuck with the injured and ill. (Sylphi and Marron). They can be a good group to reveal.
Joy would probably try to find Daixx and do research. She could probably meet up with Jaes at some point to talk to Ms Silf.
Miria and Kai can go with Tyde. They're more combat type anyway.
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Post by bluebug on Jan 5, 2008 22:28:03 GMT -5
I've been sitting here rereading the NN pages and thinking about the story. I'd like the draw and script the next pages ... knowing me it'll probably be around 10 or so. At first I was thinking of giving a lot of exposition, but I think instead it'll be a big reveal with a few evil deeds thrown in for good measure. I want to cover a lot of ground, so I hope that's alright. Basically I'll try to tie up some loose ends and move the plot forward ... The big reveals: - What's in Angelo's box - Who the dead student is ... and why - Get Jaes into the action (don't worry, there's nothing about his past in here, James ) - Give an indication of who Tai is, and what his powers are - Mess about with Marron and Lucius (evil grin) - Reveal Daixx's master plan Hopefully it's not too ambitious ... but I'm feeling in a drawing mood right now.
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Post by James StarRunner on Jan 6, 2008 3:27:15 GMT -5
I see Joy is as easy to read as a book. Had I not seen the comment, I would have suggested she do research and such too. Jaes is a loose cannon right now, not knowing what he wants to do, and likely because of it will likely wander. Sometime down the road I want to give the readers the impression that he is a villain again, even helping out Daixx or something, thinking what he has been asked to do is right.
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Post by Modesty on Jan 6, 2008 14:19:54 GMT -5
:3 We anxiously look forward to what villainous crimes you have in mind. <--Except for him. But I guess it's only fair...I did turn Daitsu into a Sim...and dressed him in pink. (But to be fair...I did get him a car. >_O)
If you need help coloring, you know who to call!
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Post by Azaeziel on Jan 7, 2008 1:57:26 GMT -5
Awesome, so BB is gonna dothe next round then?
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Post by Modesty on Jan 7, 2008 12:38:39 GMT -5
Yep...she is. :3
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Post by azalea on Jan 7, 2008 23:10:26 GMT -5
Yay BB is drawing the next pages.
hmmmm for a school setting its fun how no one seems to go to class. The school of hard knocks philosophy I suppose.
Tyde: does that mean there's no final exams? Silf: there's one- Survive! Tyde: I didn't know we were on Survivor! Silf: *sighs*
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Post by Azaeziel on Jan 8, 2008 11:11:39 GMT -5
It's the first week of class, right? Introdutory games and all that, right? Maybe the school just kinda lets students pick thier classes and study thier speciality in a kind of 'home school' like effect? They only see thier 'teachers' maybe once a week to turn in lesson plans and get advice and further study ideas? Just an idea for why they never seem to be in class, or it could just be that only a single day has passed so far in the entire story line? It was morning when Aelmon fell on Starburst, and now it is finally evening with the rain coming in and everyone escaping Lab 5? Just a few ideas. Cool.
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